✨ RUBRIC USED (based on your past writing style):
- Personal but powerful – Shares real stories without being overly dramatic
- Grounded Filipino identity – Language, values, and reflections grounded in Filipino culture
- Curious and questioning – Leaves space for wonder, not preachy
- Decolonial and self-aware – Unpacking identity, tourism, and migration critically
- Wanderlust-driven but honest – Dreams of travel, but doesn’t romanticize the struggle
- Coherent flow – Feels like a journey from childhood to present, not a résumé
- Impactful closures and beginnings – Begins and ends strong