RUBRIC USED (based on your past writing style):

  1. Personal but powerful – Shares real stories without being overly dramatic
  2. Grounded Filipino identity – Language, values, and reflections grounded in Filipino culture
  3. Curious and questioning – Leaves space for wonder, not preachy
  4. Decolonial and self-aware – Unpacking identity, tourism, and migration critically
  5. Wanderlust-driven but honest – Dreams of travel, but doesn’t romanticize the struggle
  6. Coherent flow – Feels like a journey from childhood to present, not a résumé
  7. Impactful closures and beginnings – Begins and ends strong